Friday, 17 December 2010

My Little Nut Tree – a warning about wishes

The other week I heard that children’s rhyme about nutmegs and golden pears. It goes like this:
I had a little nut tree. Nothing would it bear,
But a silver nutmeg and a golden pear.
I thought how lovely it would be to have a tree that was covered with silver nuts and laden with golden fruit. Wow! But then I had another think and I wrote this little rhyme:


It all began one winter. I was sick of nuts to eat,
So I asked my little nut tree for a very special treat.

When spring arrived my garden was all lit up with the glare
From a shining, silver nutmeg and a gleaming, golden pear.

‘What luck!’ I thought but people came from miles around to stare
At my super, silver nutmeg and my gorgeous, golden pear.

Some of them were greedy and I knew I must take care
Of my solid silver nutmeg and my great big golden pear.

So I hired guards with snarling dogs and a sign that said, ‘Beware!’
To protect my lovely nutmeg and my precious, golden pear.

But the guards gave me a bill and said, “You know it’s only fair.”
I couldn’t pay. I only had a nutmeg and a pear.

They shouted and got angry and it gave me quite a scare,
So I paid them all I had… which was the nutmeg and the pear.

That winter I was hungry. I’d not even nuts to eat.
So I made a wish and asked my tree for yet another treat.

It worked! I have a nut tree and lots of nuts it bears.
Not a single, silver nutmeg and no silly, golden pears.

I guess we should think carefully before we wish for things.

  

17 comments:

  1. Gorgeous! I've always loved that nursery rhyme (although I'm curious as to the origins). I like your take on it.

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  2. Thanks Merrilee. Some say the original rhyme was written about problems that arose when the King of Spain and his family came to England to visit King Henry VII.

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  3. What a lovely poem you wrote, I will remember your version the next time the orginal one is heard and also remember to wish only for what I can cope with....! Hugs x

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  4. You've written a delightful poem.

    Yes, I'd rather have a tree full of nuts. I can always buy nutmeg and pears at the grocery store! :)

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  5. Hi Pauline, glad you enjoyed it. :-)

    Thanks Marisa, but can you buy silver nutmegs and golden pears? ;-)

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  6. Rosalind, that was wonderful. A lesson for us all there. As you say, be careful what you wish for. Beautiful poem. Would make a great childrens story book too.

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  7. sweet! Love it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers~

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  8. That was beautiful, I loved it! I just read it out loud to my husband. I'll be thinking of your version from now on when I hear this rhyme. Have a wonderful Christmas!

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  9. Hi Nancy, so glad you enjoyed it.

    Thanks Amie, and hope your husband enjoyed it too. ;-)

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  10. That's awesome!!! We really do have to be careful about our wishes! It's amazing what can happen!

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  11. That is absolutely delightful! Great job.

    I made up a tune to go with that (original) poem for my kids and it's one of our favorites. But you've put a whole new twist on it! I love it.

    Amy

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  12. What a delightful wee poem, Rosalind!

    I think I can hear the words ringing in my head :)

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  13. You tapped right into my life-time motto... "Be careful what you wish for." I usually get what I wish for but by the time I get it, I don't want it. What a bummer, but I guess the Univrse knows best. A great little poem with a life lesson worthy of jotting on your mirror.
    Have a delightful Christmas,
    Manzanita

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  14. That's beautiful Ros - I didnt know you write poetry - and your message is spot on.

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  15. So glad that you've recognised the message in my poem. I have to admit that I do love writing in rhyme (to answer your query, Ann) It's just a shame that so many children's publishers don't accept rhyming picture book manuscripts.

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  16. I don't know the original rhyme, but I love yours! Happy holidays, Rosalind.

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  17. Absolutely lovely Ros, I think it would make a beautiful picture book.

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